http://banane.disqus.com/I write about SF, writing, and technology.enSun, 23 Jul 2006 21:02:00 -0000http://www.banane.com/2006/07/23/imurder-zeitgeist-port-a-potty/#comment-4733287<p>This is good! I love it. Keep going.</p><p>By the way, your Chapter 1 is labeled Chapter 3 for some reason, giving rise to much confusuion when I was trying to find Chapter 1.</p><p>Reads like a published mystery, so far.</p>Darlene BillstromSun, 23 Jul 2006 21:02:00 -0000